http://rattle.com/blog/2008/07/dressing-room-without-curtains-by-cheryl-dellasega/ Poetry for everyone. Wed, 08 Feb 2012 23:18:18 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 http://rattle.com/blog/2008/07/dressing-room-without-curtains-by-cheryl-dellasega/#comment-16 Tim Mon, 14 Jul 2008 18:22:05 +0000 http://www.rattle.com/blog/?p=13#comment-16 You're right, Cynthia -- thanks for pointing that out. I don't know how I missed it. You’re right, Cynthia — thanks for pointing that out. I don’t know how I missed it.

]]> http://rattle.com/blog/2008/07/dressing-room-without-curtains-by-cheryl-dellasega/#comment-13 cynthia Mon, 14 Jul 2008 13:38:54 +0000 http://www.rattle.com/blog/?p=13#comment-13 So impressed by this poem and the sensory responses to a "typical" scene, rendering it atypical. Only one concern that editors should have caught: "the pile of castoffs grows" not grow. It's the singular pile that grows as the castoffs multiply. So impressed by this poem and the sensory responses to a “typical” scene, rendering it atypical. Only one concern that editors should have caught: “the pile of castoffs grows” not grow. It’s the singular pile that grows as the castoffs multiply.

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