Comments on: “County” by Mather Schneider

By: aimzy

aimzy — Sat, 24 Jan 2009 16:08:37 +0000

This reminds me of a paragraph with random line break insertions. In other words, if you string the lines one after another, it is no different than a normal piece of writing depicting prison life.

That said, the meaning/symbolism is very powerful, so good job.

By: Mather Schneider

Mather Schneider — Sat, 17 Jan 2009 19:06:29 +0000

Dear Gina,

I guess you could have contacted me on the AD blog itself, right?

By: Mather Schneider

Mather Schneider — Sat, 17 Jan 2009 19:05:22 +0000

What in the world does amy lee’s comment have to do with my poem?

By: Mather Schneider

Mather Schneider — Sat, 17 Jan 2009 18:26:05 +0000

Gina,

you can contact me at mathereider@cox.net.

Mather

By: Gina

Gina — Sat, 10 Jan 2009 19:18:55 +0000

I like this one. It reminds me of how most people that I know will see things wrong and will not resist or try to make things better.

Good poem Mather. I would contact you about the AD blog but I don’t know how to reach you.

By: Anoth R. Poet

Anoth R. Poet — Wed, 20 Aug 2008 19:08:49 +0000

I liked this poem. A good poem to share with coworkers on your lunch hour – or add to the bulletin board.

By: amy lee

amy lee — Tue, 19 Aug 2008 14:00:55 +0000

know

now
that the contest
is at long last better than victory
itself (only
as sweet as the face sleeping next
to mine
anyway) i swear
to stay to see
it through, to keep at it
this time, cross
my heart and blow
you the kiss heard round the world
i hiss, i long
to miss