Comments on: “At the Spring” by David T. Manning http://rattle.com/blog/2009/05/at-the-spring-by-david-t-manning/ Poetry for everyone. Wed, 08 Feb 2012 23:18:18 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Phyllis Jean Green http://rattle.com/blog/2009/05/at-the-spring-by-david-t-manning/#comment-11768 Phyllis Jean Green Sun, 09 Oct 2011 15:15:59 +0000 http://www.rattle.com/blog/?p=998#comment-11768 Oh, David, this is w o n d e r f u l. No wonder your name is on so many lips!! I am writing this Sunday morning - Oct 9 - and am looking forward so much to seeing you at Ruth Moose's. All thrilled when we learned you had accepted. "Rattle" ON!! ;) {Ray likes to quote the elderly gent who said, "I may not be rollin' any more, but I'm still rattlin'!} Goin' to your new site now... Oh, David, this is w o n d e r f u l.

No wonder your name is on so many lips!!

I am writing this Sunday morning – Oct 9 – and

am looking forward so much to seeing you at

Ruth Moose’s. All thrilled when we learned

you had accepted.

“Rattle” ON!! ;) {Ray likes to quote the elderly gent who said, “I may not be rollin’ any more, but I’m still rattlin’!}

Goin’ to your new site now…

]]> By: jesusiam http://rattle.com/blog/2009/05/at-the-spring-by-david-t-manning/#comment-9668 jesusiam Fri, 20 May 2011 03:51:59 +0000 http://www.rattle.com/blog/?p=998#comment-9668 freestyle to be a hardcore punk Can u feel how my life is a funk. sure. i got off that junk but whats left But time wasted on the computer and smoking cigarettes not knowing who iam or why the fuk im still alive maybe i should just die. whats the difference i feel dead already so ramble and roll type away your problems to an empty scrren beneath the skin of my veins lies my soul. i cant quite comprehend where to go from here how to motivate myself how to kill myself No it doesnt make sense why the light is in your presence but im still dark 4 im still doomed. Cant hope for the future with a past full of ghouls. freestyle

to be
a hardcore punk
Can u feel
how my life is a funk.
sure.
i got off that junk
but whats left
But time wasted on the computer
and smoking cigarettes
not knowing who iam
or why the fuk im still alive
maybe i should just die.
whats the difference i feel dead already
so ramble and roll
type away your problems to an empty scrren
beneath the skin of my veins lies my soul.
i cant quite comprehend where to go from here
how to motivate myself
how to kill myself
No
it doesnt make sense why the light is in your presence
but im still dark
4 im still doomed.

Cant hope for the future with a past full of ghouls.

]]> By: Where the Fire Goes When it Goes Out « griffinpoetry http://rattle.com/blog/2009/05/at-the-spring-by-david-t-manning/#comment-9106 Where the Fire Goes When it Goes Out « griffinpoetry Sun, 03 Apr 2011 13:06:47 +0000 http://www.rattle.com/blog/?p=998#comment-9106 [...] At the Spring, in Rattle http://rattle.com/blog/2009/05/at-the-spring-by-david-t-manning [...] [...] At the Spring, in Rattle http://rattle.com/blog/2009/05/at-the-spring-by-david-t-manning [...]

]]> By: Jennifer http://rattle.com/blog/2009/05/at-the-spring-by-david-t-manning/#comment-1143 Jennifer Fri, 29 May 2009 19:51:22 +0000 http://www.rattle.com/blog/?p=998#comment-1143 This is a really nice poem. I like how "in the moment" it is--how we are thrust right into this surreal experience. This is a really nice poem. I like how “in the moment” it is–how we are thrust right into this surreal experience.

]]> By: FredJoul http://rattle.com/blog/2009/05/at-the-spring-by-david-t-manning/#comment-1137 FredJoul Thu, 28 May 2009 08:32:43 +0000 http://www.rattle.com/blog/?p=998#comment-1137 Has Read several times, but don't care nothing have not understood. Has Read several times, but don’t care nothing have not understood.

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