<div class="line">The workmen over and above the fence</div>
<div class="line">fit bricks, lift mortar, slap it accurately</div>
<div class="line">in place. Guilty by sitting idle, I</div>
<div class="line">imagine they envy my luxury</div>
<div class="line">of doing nothing until I remember</div>
<div class="line">the days I had my hands full of shovel,</div>
<div class="line">the dragline plowing the ditch of a sewer</div>
<div class="line">through a future subdivision and how</div>
<div class="line">I pitied those who walked by our work</div>
<div class="line">with no apparent occupation,</div>
<div class="line">denied the pleasure of making something,</div>
<div class="line">piece by piece—even if it would soon</div>
<div class="line">be buried—they would depend upon.</div><figure class="wp-block-audio"><audio controls src="https://admin.rattle.com/audio/KingWork.mp3"></audio></figure><p></p>

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<div class="line">Today the sky is blue dust</div>
<div class="line">and the mountains blue shadows</div>
<div class="line">against the dust so only</div>
<div class="line">the snow line across the peaks</div>
<div class="line">actually exists, a scribbled</div>
<div class="line">white cursive, words piling up</div>
<div class="line">here and thinning out there,</div>
<div class="line">like the long sentence you’d write</div>
<div class="line">against the sky if you thought</div>
<div class="line">you had that much to say.</div><figure class="wp-block-audio"><audio controls src="https://admin.rattle.com/audio/KingLanguage.mp3"></audio></figure>

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<div class="line">The workmen over and above the fence</div>
<div class="line">fit bricks, lift mortar, slap it accurately</div>
<div class="line">in place. Guilty by sitting idle, I</div>
<div class="line">imagine they envy my luxury</div>
<div class="line">of doing nothing until I remember</div>
<div class="line">the days I had my hands full of shovel,</div>
<div class="line">the dragline plowing the ditch of a sewer</div>
<div class="line">through a future subdivision and how</div>
<div class="line">I pitied those who walked by our work</div>
<div class="line">with no apparent occupation,</div>
<div class="line">denied the pleasure of making something,</div>
<div class="line">piece by piece—even if it would soon</div>
<div class="line">be buried—they would depend upon.</div><figure class="wp-block-audio"><audio controls src="https://admin.rattle.com/audio/KingWork.mp3"></audio></figure>

Feats of Pain and Daring

I Doodilye You Coo Coo

<p><em>Review by Janis Lull</em><img loading="lazy" decoding="async" class="alignright" style="border: 1px solid black; margin: 5px 15px; float: right;" src="https://admin.rattle.com/ereviews/images/kinglaughing.jpg" alt="" width="105" height="160" /></p>
<p><strong>OLD MAN LAUGHING<br />
by Robert King</strong></p>
<p><small>Ghost Road Press<br />
5303 E. Evans Ave #309<br />
Denver, CO 80222<br />
ISBN 0-9789456-3-8<br />
2007, 76 pp., $13.05<br />
<a href="http://ghostroadpress.com/">www.ghostroadpress.com</a></small></p>
<p>Robert King’s Old Man Laughing is divided into three parts: “Old,” “Man,” and “Laughing.” The epigraph comes from a poem by Shih-Te: “an old man laughs at himself when he falters,” which also describes the gently self-mocking tone of King’s book. The first section begins with a look back at the poet’s happy childhood, “What It Was Like Those Days&#8221;:</p>
<blockquote><p>Even the dead, I thought then,<br />
grinning as I biked around town,<br />
were happy in their own dead way.</p></blockquote>
<p>The “I” of these poems continues to roam around town and (especially) country as an adult, in a car instead of on his bike. He finds himself “West of Oglalla, I-80, by the feedlot,” (“West of Singapore”), “east of Cheyenne and Eden,” (“The Singing of Bob and Charlene”), driving past “shattering yellow butterflies,” (“The Whole Time&#8221;), or down the Missouri Valley (&#8220;Driving Home, Wherever That Is”). Often, he’s listening to his car radio, skipping from station to station as the signals fade and swell:</p>
<blockquote><p>I also think that what’s electric in the air<br />
is all our lives. Driving we escape into them<br />
again and again, pick up the pieces of ourselves<br />
we’ve denied. (“West of Singapore”)</p></blockquote>
<p>Whether he’s behind the wheel, or in a raft headed downriver, or just sitting at a sidewalk café in San Francisco, the poet is always on the lookout for pieces of himself, yet he’s always moving on:</p>
<blockquote><p>Should I stay in Potter, Nebraska,<br />
the requisite forty days<br />
and nights, I might know something<br />
about the unhowling wilderness<br />
of my own mind, but I decide to drive (“The Singing of Bob and Charlene”)</p></blockquote>
<p>At least once, I thought the speaker might be denying a little too much. In “Another Memento Mori,” he recalls trips in the family car, listening to his parents warbling “On Moonlight Bay.” I couldn’t help wondering if they sang the version where they “could hear the darkies singing,” or the one where they “hear the voices ringing.” The poet may not want to remember that part.</p>
<p>Still, the kid who becomes the old man in these poems often circles back to look at something again, as when the first poem in the last section echoes the one that opens the book: “What It Was Like Those Days” changes to “What It’s Like Now&#8221;:</p>
<blockquote><p>I thought old men would know more<br />
about earth or love or mornings than I do,</p>
<p>standing at sunrise in my own backyard<br />
married for years, dazzled at my own ignorance.</p></blockquote>
<p>King’s persona is never going to attain an absolute knowledge of anything, and by now, that’s all right with him. In another sidewalk café, reading Japanese poetry, he feels “not too well pleased with myself, / everything being an accident, / and not like a cheerful cloud / but, this afternoon, not damn far from it” (“Accidentals”). It’s not that King doesn’t write about sorrow, but that he takes it for granted; it’s just there, like light. In this book, he chooses instead to emphasize snapshots of contentment: “One day I was sad, / the next I wasn’t. Everything grew leaves around me, singing. / It was not eternal like sadness but yearly, like joy.” (“Sadnesses”)</p>
<p>As these snippets show, most of the poems in <em>Old Man Laughing</em> are divided into stanzas, often with alternate lines indented. These patterns make the poems look formal, as if matching lines should also have a matching number of syllables, for instance, or rhymes, but they don’t. This is free verse restrained by the memory of traditional forms&#8211;restrained, but not confined. One needs to think about stanza breaks as well as line breaks, although not too much, because mostly they seem to coincide with a comfortable place to take a breath. It’s easy to imagine this poet reading his work aloud. Maybe his voice is a little raspier than it was when he was younger. Or maybe not, I don’t know:</p>
<blockquote><p>And isn’t that our glory? Sprawled<br />
in the mud, tripped up by a log,<br />
half-in the river, bemused<br />
by nature temporarily<br />
until we’re bemused forever.<br />
What’s not to love? Snow in our faces,<br />
we shrug, shake our great heads, and grin.<br />
Especially old, especially alone,<br />
I laugh as, walking, I falter. (“Faltering”)</p></blockquote>

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