Paul Jones: “I’ve seen this coming. We’re not talking about a few little black birds. The vultures kettle over the cops cars, over the town buildings, in and out of any dumpster within blocks. That said they deserve a villanelle for their efforts and for their effect on anyone who has to contend with them. Rather than tell the facts, the insistence of the birds, of the feelings they evoke, and their behavior became the business of the poem.” (web)
Keetje Kuipers: “Sometimes a poem arrives in my mind quickly and nearly fully formed. That can be exciting, but it’s not necessarily as rewarding as those other times when a poem—like this one—has taken me years of quilting together saved images, actions, and moments before I arrive at a kind of shared meaning. Reading it now reminds me of the labor it takes not only to make a poem I love, but to make a life I love, too.” (web)
Alison Luterman: “The poem says it all. This past week has been heart-shredding. I’m not saying poetry can change anything right now, but it comforted me to write this, and I hope it offers comfort to anyone who reads it.” (web)
Matt Dennison: “At the age of four I found a small, white flower that had blue stripes on its petals. I told myself it was a blue-blooded bleeder and felt a sudden shock as when I had, in fact, stuck the fork in the outlet. Only this time the shock was the surge of power felt in the act of naming, of becoming ever-so-slightly larger, through words, than the event that moved us in the first place. Be it even of puking.”
Ted Kooser: “For an 85-year-old person, I’ve only once been called upon to carry a casket, and my poem describes it as best I remember it, though it has been more than forty years past. Paul was a joker, a trickster, a Wile E. Coyote of a young man, who died in a head-on collision at high speed. Had he been able, he would have delighted in making our bearing him difficult, would have pulled at our fingers or spanked our hands. It was a relief to set him down on the stretched canvas webbing and step away.” (web)
Image: “Self-Portrait as a Prep School Llama” by James Valvis. “The Grass Ceiling” was written by Kevin West for Rattle’s Ekphrastic Challenge, December 2024, and selected as the Artist’s Choice.
Comment from the artist, James Valvis: “I love the mixture of whimsy and woe in this poem. I’m especially impressed by the whimsy. Poets are often too serious. It’s a llama in a suit! It’s ridiculous. (Kind of like its artist.) What’s not ridiculous is the poet’s skill and tight wordplay. Kudos to the winner, and a hearty thanks to all the others that made the choice its own challenge.”
Ron Koertge: “A while ago I read at a retirement center with some friends. Afterwards, someone mentioned the Faulkner quote: ‘The past is never dead. It’s not even past.’ I wasn’t surprised when I got home, sat down and wrote the first draft of ‘The Afterlife.’”