July 3, 2024

Rohan Buettel

THIS TOO SHALL PASS

The flame that burns so bright, this too shall pass
However strong the light, this too shall pass
 
You heap the wood upon the open fire
And set the world alight, this too shall pass
 
You work so hard, achieve so many dreams
A rocket soars in flight, this too shall pass
 
The spells you cast bewitch my ears, my eyes
Your beauty blinds my sight, this too shall pass
 
You overlook my faults, you bring me love
How much does love excite? this too shall pass
 
You keep me safe from every growing fear
When terror fills the night, this too shall pass
 
You sow the grapes to make the finest wines
The vines will suffer blight, this too shall pass
 
Your ventures will all fail, the world is cruel
When nothing helps your plight, this too shall pass
 
A nasty streak to kick you when you’re down
Endure the wounds of spite, this too shall pass
 
When love is lost your grief so raw inside
You hold the pain so tight, this too shall pass
 
The poet thinks his lines encompass life
And ever will delight, this too shall pass

from Rattle #84, Summer 2024

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Rohan Buettel: “I like writing ghazals, like sonnets, because they have strict formal requirements. There is a pleasure in meeting the challenge of writing a formal poem complying with the requirements. Then there is the pleasure of writing more contemporary poems dispensing with some of those elements (such as rhyme). As there is no metrical requirement, there is also the pleasure of experimenting with different meters or free verse. I see the ghazal as the equivalent of the sonnet form developed in the Middle East. Some ghazals in English work very well when they incorporate sonnet-like aspects, such as a strict iambic pentameter. I have always felt uncomfortable using my own name in the last stanza, so use a more self-effacing reference.”

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July 2, 2024

Sally Bliumis-Dunn

MEANING

My mother is eighty-two,
not so steady on her feet;
 
she falls now and then;
last week, in her driveway;
 
missed a step she said; she has
more of them now:
 
moments when she seems
almost absent from herself
 
and the greedy earth pulls her.
I watch leaves fall
 
and wonder how
it can be the same word,
 
a few yellow leaves now,
just outside my window,
 
caught suddenly in
an updraft, like butterflies
 
drifting down, before
they land on a flower,
 
wings opening,
and closing like lungs.

from Rattle #26, Winter 2006

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Sally Bliumis-Dunn: “I think I write poems to try and discover what I feel. Try as I might, I’ve never found another vehicle that does as well. I live in Armonk, New York, with my husband John. We share four children, Ben, Angie, Kaitlin and Fiona.” (web)

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July 1, 2024

Jen DeGregorio

AN ARGUMENT AGAINST CYNICISM

What surprises me more than a new
millipede species was discovered this week
in Los Angeles County is that anyone cares
enough about millipedes to look for them. Entomologists
may be the last true heroes. They may be
a species unto themselves, one they have overlooked
in their zeal to turn from the mirror
toward the dirt. The Illacme socal
has four hundred eighty-six legs, a toothy head,
the L.A. Times says, and the greenish translucence
of a glow-in-the-dark toy. It weaves through the soil
as elegantly as an embroiderer’s needle. The reporter
must have labored over these phrases, felt enough
joy in prose to fuel her a few more days
in her reviled profession. A survey this year said half
of Americans think all journalists are liars. To them I offer
Corinne Purtill, who surely spent hours listening
to entomologists so she could tell us something approaching
the true nature of millipedes—not insects
but arthropods, more like lobsters than beetles,
vile-tasting to birds, garbagemen
of the forest, eaters of dead leaves they transform
into food for what grows—and of entomologists
themselves. How one named Paul Marek drove
on Christmas to Whiting Ranch to find specimens
which he gently scooped into plastic vials
with a bit of soil, then tucked into his carry-on
for the trip back to his lab. Attention
is the highest form of love. And I love entomologists
for the attention they pay to the smallest among us, and journalists
for the attention they pay to the ones who pay attention
to the spectrum of beauty and terror, our discoveries
and petty political battles and vicious crimes and acts
of unearned mercy and weddings and burials
in the somehow still teeming earth.
 

from Rattle #84, Summer 2024

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Jen DeGregorio: “I woke up one morning last July and sat down hoping to write a poem. I had just gotten back into a regular poetry-writing practice after a long hiatus and was fearful that my creative well had gone dry. While pre-poem internet surfing, I somehow happened upon the news about the millipede discovery, and this poem poured out of me in about an hour (though I’ve been studying and writing poetry seriously for twenty years, so I’m no savant). The care with which the journalist had written about this millipede species and the entomologists studying it struck me as so touching; I felt overwhelmed by feeling for the journalist and the entomologists, doing what I’ll call God’s work (though I’m not sure what I mean by God). So much is heartbreaking in our world, but reading this story lifted my spirit: The Earth is still full of mystery, and there are good, curious people out there who wish to help us unravel it. Journalists—often maligned—are heroes to me. Entomologists are heroes. Anyone who is committed to nurturing this world—including through study, through the sharing of knowledge—is a hero. But such heroes, these quieter ones, often go unsung. Let poetry sing their praise.” (web)

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June 30, 2024

Alison Luterman

MOCKINGBIRDS

My friend says she wants to shoot
the mockingbirds who infest the big tree
outside her window and sing all night.
The violence of their squawks is not the same
as the violence of our thoughts
about them at 2 a.m. or the gunshots
and illegal fireworks punctuating this warm evening
as we sit in front of our television watching two old men,
one blustering, one faltering
at the lip of the abyss, and an invisible pool
of despair spreads like blood out from the screens
and into our living rooms and pools around our feet
and we lift our feet up but go on watching
as it engulfs us on our sofas, forks poised
halfway to our mouths, frozen there, watching.
And just as the violence of the what the actual fuck
we’ve had some of the smartest women on the planet
in contention for this job, but no, it’s gotta be
two men who cannot seem to form
one coherent sentence between them
spraying from my mouth like machine gun fire
is not the same as the killer in the supermarket
spewing real bullets that ricochet off carts,
or the maniac at the music festival with his bump stock,
or the white supremacist at the Black church,
or the anti-Semite at the synagogue, still, I confess,
there is murder in my heart, there is so much rage
boiling inside my own body, inside the body
of everyone I know—we are all simmering this summer
with a thin metallic taste in our mouths
as if we’d been given old-fashioned shock treatments
which we have, and are now sitting inside
the absolute blankness of the aftermath
with our unanswerable questions
who are we and how did we get here,
and what the hell happens now?
 

from Poets Respond

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Alison Luterman: “I find myself unable to watch either of the two candidates currently vying for the office of the President of the United States of America. I will vote for the Democrat, of course. But I am still not over my disappointment that Elizabeth Warren was bumped out of the 2020 race, or the other qualified women who could be leading our country brilliantly right now were it not for patriarchy.” (web)

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June 29, 2024

Claire Beeli (age 15)

ABECEDARIAN FOR THE HORSES IN A TRAILER ON ROUTE 66

above the hood of this
beetle of a car, the sky
carries itself lightly. hugely. blue. i
don’t know where we’re going. i don’t think you do,
either, with your fine
ears like the ends of mustaches and your
eyes, round and dark and as slow to
fall as the night. i don’t know where we’re
going but i don’t think it’s there. we can’t
grieve yet because we don’t know what for. because we don’t know
how it even began;
how to even begin. the desert here could be enough,
i think, for us. if we could
just tilt the wheel a bit too far right, to
knife through the barriers
like the rain, when it comes. i can’t stay here.
my legs ache from disuse and i keep
nudging the early sky but it won’t wake. there,
over the ridge somewhere, could be a herd, a
place for us to go. for the taste of air beyond this
quiet, far from this soft rush of
rubber on the morning. you could
start with your hooves in the sands and
the sun on your coat, light
unfiltered by the windows of this dark
van. i could start without sunscreen, with
waves of heat that hold me like a womb.
we can start here, if you want. there is no numbered-lettered
exit. there is no too late, no number of
years. there is only now, and the wheel, and the
yell that is pounding hooves, and the hot
zenith of living,
so free it hurts.

from 2024 Rattle Young Poets Anthology

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Why do you like to write poetry?

Claire Beeli: “I write poetry as a sort of record, and as a medium for working out complex ideas. Each image, clever phrase, and stanza becomes a permanent record of a thought, an emotion I’ve observed, or an experience I’ve had, rendering them immortal. I’d like to think that I’ll be able to look back in 10, 20, or even 50 years to what I’ve written as a teenager and recognize each poem as a time capsule. I use writing to tease out the connections between varied, nuanced concepts, too—to form unlikely pairings of images and ideas or work out the kinks in a kind of philosophical argument. To me, it’s the most useful art form there is.”

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June 28, 2024

Maaz Bin Bilal

AT THE END

How can one ever begin at the end?
—Death is regeneration at the end
 
Waiz lives piety, prays five times a day
He knows not the joys of sin at the end
 
How do I sin—I am no Catholic
I will have no confession at the end
 
I am Muslim but don’t bow at the mosque
Will He give me salvation at the end?
 
Try but you cannot kill me, I’m Hindu
I have reincarnation at the end
 
Please bury me next to the synagogue
I too faced crucifixion at the end
 
The Pharaohs built palatial pyramids
They’d go in style they’d reckon at the end
 
Don’t burn, don’t bury, sink me in the sea
Maaz, no commemoration at the end
 

Notes: Waiz, in Urdu from Arabic, means preacher, homilist, adviser, admonisher, exhorter. Maaz is my takhallus (penname), from Arabic, and means asylum, refuge.

from Rattle #84, Summer 2024

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Maaz Bin Bilal (from the conversation): “Poetry exists even in our cinema, for example, as most of our films, especially until recently, used to be musicals, so all the film songwriters are often poets from Urdu, which is my mother tongue. Urdu ghazals, which are derived from Persian ghazals, and which in turn are derived from Arabic ghazals, are sung often and set to music. As I was growing up in my own house, my father would often play the ghazal genre of music on the record or cassette player. So Urdu poetry, and film songs also, which are derived from particularly Urdu poetry and ghazals, were all around me. … [W]hile growing up, the ghazal was the kind of poetry that I was most in tune with. I soaked in the rhythms, the rhymes, the ideas.” (web)

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June 27, 2024

Bird Ascending the Fire by Barbara Hageman Sarvis, painting in oranges and purples of a bird flying over a woodland lake

Image: “Bird Ascending the Fire” by Barbara Hageman Sarvis. “An Early Autumn Light that Unburies You” was written by Steven Pan for Rattle’s Ekphrastic Challenge, May 2024, and selected as the Editor’s Choice.

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Steven Pan

AN EARLY AUTUMN LIGHT THAT UNBURIES YOU

On earth, everything no longer
here is here in some variation
 
of light. An ice age
half-gone, all geography
 
shaved off youngest to oldest:
craters and lakes telling time
 
in reverse. Someday we’ll end
up there, you used to say,
 
pointing to the sun setting
over the strand. The season
 
and the leaves, starting
over again in a dream
 
with everything that lived
before this. Is it strange,
 
how a hurt that looked back
at you, looks like all of you
 
in the amber slowness
before evening. The detour
 
of your shadow
somewhere, casting a hook
 
over the water, perception
as imprecise as memory
 
or the autumn lingering
inside of it. Any year
 
straying no further
than the line of a robin’s
 
wings, the slight lean
of the trees that said life
 
held on. If I could call
you back, would this shore
 
be the one you’d wait on? How often
I mistake the sound of the wind
 
for the sound of your answer.
Your answer for a goodbye said
 
aloud. Goodbye for a matter
of time, or maybe a matter
 
of timing. Like a bird caught
mid-flight in the light
 
of the sky, brimming with everything
and nothing at once.
 

from Ekphrastic Challenge
May 2024, Editor’s Choice

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Comment from the editor, Megan O’Reilly: “There are many aspects of ‘An Early Autumn Light that Unburies You’ that left an impression, from its smooth flow and musicality to its depth of meaning, but what stands out most, perhaps, is the way it’s peppered with gorgeous and brilliant turns of phrase–so many the effect could be overwhelming in the hands of a less adept poet. In the very same sentence, we find ‘The detour / of your shadow,’ ‘perception / as imprecise as memory’ (a stunningly insightful description), and ‘the autumn lingering / inside of it.’ One could read these lines many times and still be taken by the beauty and profundity of the poet’s language. When I first saw this image, I thought such a dramatic and striking piece of art would be challenging to match. I can’t imagine a better partner than this poem.”

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