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      September 28, 2017Mint in PotsAnn Wuehler

      Image: “Street Folks” by Jennifer O’Neill Pickering. “Mint in Pots” was written by Ann Wuehler for Rattle’s Ekphrastic Challenge, August 2017, and selected as the Editor’s Choice.
      Your brain is full of worms, he said.
      I no longer wish to drink stardust coffee
      from your stinking bones.
      That’s fine, she said.
      I grew mint in pots in the window
      trying to please you
      and I folded some of your shirts
      until my fingers got tired
      and my eyes
      went to a dead fly in the windowsill.
      Were we ever in love, he asked.
      What mint? You never grew mint,
      how you lie
      about the little things
      to make me feel guilty.
      Maybe it was basil or lavender
      or chives, it was something
      in a little red pot
      with dirt
      that smelled like fried potatoes.
      You see, he tapped her arm
      and lifted his face to the morning.
      You tell stories about me
      and put in snips
      to martyr yourself.
      I let you talk, she said.
      I don’t need to burn at a stake for you, my dear.
      I remember mint.
      I don’t remember loving you this morning,
      but I remember the mint.
      The mint as real as my hat,
      you a ghost
      sitting beside me
      trying to make me doubt.
      Now I am a ghost, he said
      and he laughed.
      She put her back to him,
      and smiled.
      I am not afraid, she said,
      of ghosts.
      They are lovely little monsters
      to hang from the hooks in my brain
      and they grow so well
      when planted with mint
      in a little pot
      in a sunny window.
      Ah, he rose to his feet.
      I shall like making love
      to mint and dirt and sunshine.
      And napping all day.
      I’m so glad, she kept smiling,
      her tiny stars and ashes smile.
      Love dies, they were wrong about
      love, he replied
      and she nodded her head,
      she nodded her head
      and had nothing else
      to tell him just then.

      from Ekphrastic Challenge

      Comment from the editor on this selection

      “I can’t remember the last time I’ve been so captivated by the dialogue in a poem. ‘Mint in Pots’ reads like a Hemingway short story, full of great lines by two great characters, and that was even more refreshing than mint in a pot.”