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      June 19, 2015Teeny TinyMatthew Murrey

      It took forever for the light
      to fade. All my manhood,
      that old overcoat, was gone,
      and I was no more than five
      setting off through the forest.
       
      They say in a vacuum a feather
      falls like a stone. They say
      you see your life pass before you
      when you’re at death’s door.
      They say jawbone walk
      and jawbone talk. They say
      things I’ll never understand.
       
      I remember a story of a tiny boy
      and his two older brothers lost
      in the woods. They found shelter
      for a night in the house of a stranger
      who kept sharpening a long knife,
      who kept calling up to the loft,
      “Who is awake, and who is asleep?”
       
      I couldn’t stay awake forever.
      Even here the feather finally lands
      on the needled path, the heart
      has a weight all its own,
      and every step I take erases me
      just a little more. See,
      you can barely see me.
      What I’m trying to tell you is
      it wasn’t a light at the end of a tunnel,
      and it wasn’t as scary as the scrape
      of a knife being readied on a stone.
      Then again, it wasn’t a walk in the park either.

      from Ekphrastic Challenge

      Comment from the painter, Åsa Antalffy Eriksson

      “This was hard. As I read through the poems, I thought it would be impossible to select a winner. Then I read them again, and again, and forced myself to drop one after the other. Quite a few of the poems made me cry—many had written about a child lost, and some of those pieces were almost too much to bear: well-written, deeply touching and evoking one of my greatest fears as a mother. Yet, I did not choose any of them for a winner. In the end, the poem I could not drop was Matthew Murrey’s ‘Teeny Tiny.’ It has a good flow and not a single weak line. It balances perfectly between narration and suggestion, presenting a sombre theme with a sort of casualness that appeals to me no end. ‘Teeny Tiny’ echoes the atmosphere and the imagery of my painting faithfully, but also adds something completely new and unexpected.”