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      May 27, 2021White SpotsElizabeth McMunn-Tetangco

      Image: “While Thinking About Snow and Ice” by Jojo. “White Spots” was written by Elizabeth McMunn-Tetangco for Rattle’s Ekphrastic Challenge, April 2021, and selected as the Editor’s Choice.
      Sometimes you look for something else.
      A corner where there might be rust.
       
      An eyelash width.
      A speck of dirt.
       
      How you can use a poem’s words to keep
      your distance.
       
      Put a man there, in the picture, just
      to see.
       
      (You Google it and see a thousand
      small attacks: the man a hacker now, a hood over his face.)
       
      It is too much.
       
      You change tacks and think of sugar,
      silver tongs to lift each cube.
       
      Whiter than
       
      white.
       
      The space around
      that.
       
      Next you see an envelope, lose
      it again.
       
      You wonder if there is a Rorschach test
      for love (of course there’s not).
       
      You think of how a friend said once she couldn’t tell
      when you’re in love.
       
      The more you look, you see the frayed
      spots, little
       
      gasps.
      You stop to breathe.
       
      You think of wings, or long wide
      oars.
       
      You remember this past winter, flying snow
      geese, in a sheet.
       
      How you could see the things you wanted to see
       
      there (if you had looked).
      How they slept next to the highway
       
      in small heaps.

      from Ekphrastic Challenge
      April 2021, Editor’s Choice

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      Comment from the editor, Timothy Green: “Elizabeth McMunn-Tetangco has won the Ekphrastic Challenge five times now over the seven years of the series and seems to be a master of the short line. She wields them like a scalpel, carving deeper into the image with each quick stroke, exposing unseen details and revealing the mysteries that lie beneath.”

      from Ekphrastic Challenge

      Comment from the editor, Timothy Green

      “Elizabeth McMunn-Tetangco has won the Ekphrastic Challenge five times now over the seven years of the series and seems to be a master of the short line. She wields them like a scalpel, carving deeper into the image with each quick stroke, exposing unseen details and revealing the mysteries that lie beneath.”